my stripes bled tears,
calling out to those who left me behind,
- know that I am here,
....forever, loving you -
Author notes
Used # 21
My thoughts on how Jesus felt -
Google thiese lyrics and listen while reading this entry....God bless you..>>>
Artist: Gladys Knight and the Saints
Song: He Lives
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Beautifully and profoundly written in very few words brother Bear. An excellent job with presentation as well. Scott
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Oh My!
This is so profound & gripping in a concise & precise way!
It gripped my heart & reminded me of how I must grieve Him when I slip & forget to put Him first when I owe Him my life & am under the cover of His blood shed for me & all! 
So powerful! 
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WOW! Wonderful image!
Amazing statement and visual image! Very nice!
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Intense words to match the picture, indeed the love endures forever.
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the pictures was a very emotional touch added thank you for the entry and the wonderful message.
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This brings tears to my eyes. He loves us so much despite our rejections. Beautifully written and presented.
- jo -
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Thank you Jo.....God bless you!
In the middle of the POW right now....I hope to jump over and return the favor as time permits
Bear ~
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Hi Bear,
Hard to believe you didn't walk away with a trophy for this, not that I've looked at the competition.
It's a beautiful thought and so very hopeful...thanks so much for sharing and posting this in the reading room! 
Love ya this much and more,
~J.
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Beautiful!
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that was soooooo beautiful
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An excellent testament to your faith in brevity. Well done. ~Pamela
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What more can I say Arkbear but this is AWESOME! THANKS for sharing your talents!!
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You didn't win anything with this, shocker! Love it.
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.........and thank God He is always here loving us. Good luck in the contest. Great job - AGAIN!
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deep and powerful my dear friend spoken with such profound truch and compassioned wonderment. well done I'm sorry for not having been around to read your remarkable poetic artistry. many blessings always xxx
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I think you nailed what Jesus was thinking to the tee. Whenever we lose ground it is he who picks us up and carries us along.... Great job and good luck in the contest.
~S~G~
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Very powerful piece you have penned and I am sure that this was indeed his thoughts.....Many blessings my friend!
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This is a nice write indeed goodluck to you with it best wishes and mant blessing be well
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Such an intense truth. I think that this is a piece that all should read. In it is inspiration and reminder that we never have to be alone. He never walks away... we do. Beautifully penned and best wishes in the comp
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This is indeed sad--as it speaks of losing someone or them not being around anymore and yet it is inspirational, as you know that you will one day commune with them again. Joyful and thought provoking, I wish you the best of luck in the judging process
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Nicely penned from your convictions.
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A powerful 10 words. Even if we don't walk away from Him, we often leave Him behind. I hope it does well in the contest, good luck.
Kelli
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Terribly sad, but effective... great write!
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