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Taryn

A cute little baby,
Who I love so much!!!
A cute little baby,
Who loves to touch.

She's sweet,
Adorable,
And,oh,so cute!!

Hey,you baby!!
What do you have for me?!
Hey,you baby!!
How are you for me?!

Your so cute,
Adorable,
And the sweetest thing ever!!!
But most of all...

I still love you the most!!!


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  • nice

    loves


  • GuitarBoy96
    September 24, 2008
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    Hey Maddie

    havent seen you on in a while.Hope your leg gets bttr.P.S You need to add more poems,i'll help,see u soon!


  • GuitarBoy96
    June 26, 2008

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    Aww

    It's nice that you care for Taryn so much even though she's not your sister! keep up the good work Maddie!

  • Topnotchsy
    June 25, 2008

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    Nice write. Keep loving her and looking out for her. As an older sister you are in the position to teach her about life and can be her greatest friend or worst enemy.


  • nichtmich silver member
    June 25, 2008

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    Awwww, this is absolutely adorable! Do you have a new baby sister? Soon she'll smile everytime she hears your voice, if not already! She'll look up to you to help her and teach her all the things she needs to know This is a great poem and your happiness is contagious. Thanks for bringing me a smile with your poetry!


  • crazymomma
    June 25, 2008

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    Wow! for being only 9 years old this is amazing. You have good flow and nice rhyme and the honest emotion is great. Keep writing you are so good


  • SilverWolf
    June 25, 2008

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    Awww this is so sweet! It is short but very sweet! Such a great poem for one so young. I am glad you are taking up poetry. It is a great thing to see you write. It is just great. Poetry is a awesome thing for young people like you to do this type of thing. Please continue. Awesome poem little child of God. God bless you little soul.

    Wolf Loner

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