When gold knew no value
and time was not treasured,
life was not wasted
on should haves.
When no one wished on shooting stars,
wishes were granted through waiting.
A contest entry
- PIF - Free Verse Word Prompt by Dalaney.
850 points, ended July 4, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest feedback please.
Comments
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I like this very much. Simple and clear. Good work. Love, Lane
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I really like this...especially the last line. People don't like waiting any more, for anything. Very nice write.
Kelli
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