Want to cut
want to bleed
want to laugh
want to cry
Watch it flow
down my arm
to the floor
till there is no more
They say its blue
before it hits the air
as long as it flows beautifully
the color it is, I don’t care
I never cut
I never bleed
don’t want to laugh
to dead to cry
~The Beast~
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Just thoughts
Written January 2nd, 2004
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the raw edge of self destructive tendencies has left a few gashes here that are readable only in post motrn script...i hope all whi read this words will take up a feather and release there soul through a quill rather than a razor releasing their pain through a kill....Artis
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Ugh. Well, I mean, the emotion and energy are very out there. Raw and to the point. Of course, I am not a fan of self-mutilation in any way, shape, or form, so I find myself a little put off by this one. But, the emotions are well expressed. You can feel them quite well as the reader. One thing, in the end, you have a 'to' that should be a 'too'. Just a small thing.
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great write and cool backround. keep it up.
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wow that is just brillant great dispay of emotion and imagery
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EXCELLENT
EXCELLENT Poem. alot of Raw emotion. Very Very good. Keep writing!!!!
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