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My pain is like a fire

my pain is like a fire
but instead of slowly dieing
my pain keeps raising the flames
keep burning my heart keeps acking
and i keep praying

so what do you think

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  • kitty23
    October 7, 2008

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    PERFECTION OF COURSE

    Well hello there havn't heard or seen you in awhile
    but anyway the poem is very great
    this is very realatable and everything
    it was short but you can understand the pain your going through right now
    i just was also going to put in here that i love you and miss you so much i wish i could see you right now and just give you the biggest hug ever
    but anyways great write
    i wish you didn't have to go throw so much but i guess thats just life you know
    well
    thanks for sharing

    love always
    kitty


  • Kelli Marie
    June 25, 2008

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    A very nice write. I can relate to this. A couple things if you don't mind...dieing should be dying...and acking should be aching..other than that...good job.
    Kelli


  • XxshadowprincessxX
    June 25, 2008
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    welcome back!

    like the poem babe...missed you...write me back whenever you can.....
    sammi