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Silence forsaken

Elegant beauty
dressed in purples and blues,
tainted with slights of black,
painted purity in the works.

Somber recollections-
attributes put on hold as
the world fights about it
trying to find someone to take the blame.

Silenced by insecurities,
the beauty melts and fades away,
leaving dust upon a piano key
of dreams that once meant something.

Dreams that could have created a world
filled with delight and vigor,
instead wilt within the mind
of a mute poet, a saddened soul.

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Silence of a Butterfly

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 25, 2008

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    awww this is a really beautiful piece together and I love the gentleness of it and the way you have added imagery in it well done


    • Livingemptyspaces
      June 25, 2008
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      I'm glad you liked. Hope everything goes well with your book though.
      ((I absolutely suck at graphics, or I would have attempted that to help out))