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Motor Car Racing

Engines started with a flash
Hearts began to pound
As the motor cars speeded off
Into the suns, dusk that melted up the road
Sliding back & forth… face first…
Face first into the wall as the body exploded upon the impact
Death comes to give a pass on, death comes in & death picks up the order on the menu…
Road kill… road kill for death’s blood thirsting teeth to own the soul until the final destination being…
Heaven or, Hades! Heaven or, Hades! Heaven or, Hades!

{Sir. Love Coffin}

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Written On: June 25th 2008 Wednesday 3:47 PM; Idea Off: Smashing Pumpkins’ Song: Tear

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  • crazymomma
    June 25, 2008

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    I didn't expect the ending at all. I love Indy car racing but always feel so sad when someone does die. This has great imagery.