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Aural Thermometer

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Please come...

  Spend the day,

and we’ll read
into the dog eared morning
by the creak and swing
  to limbs in the breeze.

Please stand...

  (Make me melted lemonade)
Secure to me, savor a sloe gin
of wood thrush
    and clamor.

Please wait...

  Draw circles to
  drag nourishment to the margin
charging lips, tips
and parallel parked rosehips,
      firmly at idle.

Please accept...

  My engagement rolls resonance
to courted slumber. 

I give you dreams,
  I give you the marrow of the morrow,
      I give you self…








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  • BearWoman gold member
    July 25
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    Beautiful. Congrats on the bronze.


  • ea silver member
    September 17, 2008

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    I like some of the details in this piece, like
    dragging nourishment to the margin and parallel parked rosehips - inventive writing!


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 1, 2008
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    I asked for soft love.. and soft and sensual I got. Thank you very much. Riftkin


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    Fabulous!

    I am loving this to pieces my friend. Your internal rhyme is simply stunning.

    charging lips, tips, rosehips... Ahhh that just made my day. A soft easy place to love, and care. Gentle and tender with simpler things mingled with a complex self that finds joy in an appreciative smile.

    Poetic beauty my friend. A true stunner. Excellent work. ~Pamela

    • paulcreates silver member
      June 28, 2008
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      Thank you Pam for your lovely comment. I almost think it's cheating when I write to one of my favorite subjects.

      Paul


  • Dalaney gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    i want to read this poem over and over.
    Love, Lane


  • klassy lassy
    June 27, 2008

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    This one sure made me smile, Paul. "(Make me melted Lemonade)" Sounds like the gentle persuasions of a summer romance to me, languid and dreamy. I especially like the last three lines, for their substance of love! Beautifully done! ~ Karen


  • tara wilson gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    "and we’ll read
    into the dog eared morning
    by the creak and swing
    to limbs in the breeze."

    this poem is gorgeous, Paul!

    • paulcreates silver member
      June 26, 2008
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      Thank you Tara. I prefer what one might refer to as sensual or "barely erotica" poems. I'm glad that you enjoyed this.
      Paul

  • Amarige
    June 25, 2008

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    Didn't know you write 'Adult' poems...This was so soft and lovely..very elegant actually..I love it..wonderful job Paul
    Ruby

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