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I found Release

My fist held tight
        My eyes wide open

My heart fastly beating
        My breath so very shallow

I look down at the veins
            Burning, Itching
                          Longing
                              To find release

I grab a blade
        Only one thing in mind
                Cut until the poison is drained

Watching as the blood flows down
              Rushing down to my wrist
                        Hand fills with blood (I smile)

No tears today did you get from me
        You try and try to cause me pain
                  But I can not be hurt by you anymore

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A contest entry

Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!

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  • XxemohatexX
    June 26, 2008
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    wow that is realy good iwish everyone could win my contest


  • buffsab99
    June 25, 2008
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    I hope you released the poison forever I need you here


  • Livingemptyspaces
    June 25, 2008

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    It's the poison of our days that remind us that we're alive. good job with this sweet heart, and I hope your able to feel better.

    -Les

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