Love is like a waterfall running swiftly, by love is like a waterfall gleaming in your eye. Love is like a waterfall in the sky. love is like a waterfall up so high love love is so strong like a waterfall love is so like a crisp water fall love is like a waterfall.
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this is a poem about lovers
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aha!!! good work, i like the repetition. you make a good point. never really thought of love being like a waterfall, creative! i love it. i like how you switch it up in the last line by saying, " love is so strong like a waterfall love." by the way, i love the word swift. it is a great poem, and it has a little beauty to it. lol!
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Welcome To all poetry
Hi Brysssa
Love is like a waterfall sometimes it can get away from us
I think your poem would have more of an impact if you broke the sentences up a little bit Good poem
Please keep writing, reading and commenting
Barbara
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Thanks
sorry about the spacing on the sentences.
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