Its a crazy sort
How fast we differ
From our yesterday, how quickly down a path,
One can be lead a stray.
How I miss you each and every day
But you are not here
I am, alone, forgotten
Only a year ago, we were best friends,
today I could pass you, like you were no big part,
of my life, and that is really sad
How fast has this world changed us, how different we are now
I miss our long conversations, about nothing, and everything
I mostly miss us, how you held me in your eyes,
that special place you found in my heart
Seasons change, so do attitudes, life moves on,
Its a crazy sort
How fast we differ
From our yesterday
Its a crazy sort
That you have become a stranger
When you were once my everything
Now you are my nothing.
It is a crazy sort
How fast things can change
In only a yesterday
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in only a yesterday
A contest entry
- You're Not Here Anymore by Annexed Josephine.
300 points, ended June 26, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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iI thought that this was great and thought if you were to trim the lines that it would look like an oil lamp keep doing well love the rev papa
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WOW... Hah, this was a bit personal to me.
Except it happened a long time ago,
but still I can relate to it.
And I really think this is good.
Well done,
wish you luck in the contest
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Seasons change, so do attitudes, life moves on
Well. Hmmm
I realize how harsh this is going to sound- but I'll say it anyways
How old were you when you wrote this?
This information may help in my determining. -
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Seasons change, so do attitudes, life moves on
this part, is personal for me, it references back to when i lost a whole group of friends over something petty, it was in the summer, then in the fall we all went to school, and our attitudes changed about the situation and our lives moved on. I dont know why that would come under fire
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