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Change

a penny and a quarter
a nickle and a dime
this is change
big change takes time
take the time
let the change build up
continue building
then it will become big change

a haircut and a dye
a facelift another guy
this is change
big change takes time
take the time
let the change build up
continue building
then it will become big change


Author notes

copywright Amy Rowsell 2008
i wrote this a long time ago, like about 9-10 yrs ago

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  • Annexed Josephine
    June 25, 2008
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    This is genius. I love how both "change"$$$ and "change" are together. Really good.


  • Kelli Marie
    June 25, 2008

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    This is interesting. I think it is a great write seeing that you wrote it when you were 9 or 10. Good luck in the contest.
    Kelli


    • peridotPixi
      June 25, 2008
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      9 or 10 yrs ago would have made me about 14-15 thanks for the comment