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If She Dies.

Look into each other’s eyes,
Feel each other’s presence,
And dance…
The dance…
The dance of life,
Spin and jump,
Leap and fly,
Twirl and soar,
You are dancing,
The dance…
The dance of life,
Reach up to the mountain ranges,
Stretch with all your might,
Then swoop down into the
oceans…
scoop up water and gulp it down,
Then spin…in eachother’s arms,
Male and the female,
Together…
Smiling…
Until one of you falls…
The girl,
Her face will contort
With pain,
She will clutch her stomach,
And fall…down and down,
The boy will have no one to dance with,
He will screech…
The mountain ranges will shake,
Giant waves will form,
Volcanoes will erupt.
The whole world will go mad,
If she dies,
If she dies,
If she dies.
And…now?
Now – she’s dead.

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I was listening to "Amelie" music and it sounded like dancing and I was in a weird mood. And I literally just wrote and this is what happened

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  • Dark Otter
    July 6, 2008

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    Global imagination

    A good concept that I wish had finished differently. Happy imagination took me dancing with you. I wished for a better ending to such a lighthearted romantic start.


  • xXmidnightstarXx
    June 26, 2008

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    I like it. It's a little weird, but hey, weird is good in my book . Great write. If that was inspired by "Amelie" music, then I think I'll go listen XD. Great write...again XD. Thanks for sharing.