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Prayer for Peace

We long for peace,
That wars may cease,
The hungry fed,
The poor given their daily bread.

O that we would be content with less,
So those around the world
Who hungry go to bed,
May have their fill.

We pray for peace...
See it in the face of a child,
In the golden sunset,
Or the beauty of a flower.

Help us translate the love of God
Into a million acts of kindness,
Reconciliation between sworn enemies,
Hurts healed, broken lives restored.

I know this is big prayer to ask, Lord,
But let your peace begin in me;
May I always carry the peace of your
Indwelling presence wherever I go.

Amen

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  • Shantti
    May 3

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    Oh this is beautiful! and Amen This is a beautiful prayer that I think should be shared all over. Thank you for this wonderful entry


  • SpeakLove93
    April 13

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    Bless You

    This is a wonderful prayer. Hopefuly every person who reads this counts this as their own little prayer for a better world. God knows we could use one. Your words aare truly inspirational. Very nicely done and thank you for entering!


  • Kathraina silver member
    March 30

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    I definitly long for peace and often times struggle with it. That's why my favorite Bible verse is Col. 3:15, helps me alot LoLz
    Lovely piece, great job!

    ♥ Kate

    • harriet567
      March 30
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      Thank you so much, Kate, for your encouraging comment. I also like that verse - it was the Bible reading we chose for our wedding (Col 3:12-17). God bless, love Cathy (Harriet is my screen name).


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    February 8
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    This is a very beautiful and meaningful prayer. Congrats on winning Gold and God bless you!

    • harriet567
      February 9
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      Thank you for your encouraging comment. God bless you too! Love, Harriet


  • trekkergirl
    February 8

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    nicely written

    I like this some really nice thoughts and feeling behind this prayer. You did well. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.

    • harriet567
      February 10
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      Thank you SO MUCH for awarding my prayer the Gold Trophy!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 28, 2008

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    amen...what a heartfelt prayer you wrote with so much depth and beauty of love..a great work..thanks for your wonderful entry...

    • harriet567
      June 28, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for your encouraging comments - and thanks for all your thought provoking contests that give us inspiration to write!

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