"You should have left her alone
That young girl you saw on the street,
following her and stealing her innocence,
this was only your first mistake.
Allowing me to catch you
was your second and final one.
Your pleading eyes will get you nowhere,
you are vile filth with no further use.
Four blocks of ice , in the corner they sit
you ask me what for?
soon enough you will see."
I take the ice from is spot
in the shadowed corner across the room
and place it dead center as you watch.
With hands bound behind your back
there is very little you can do.
A wooden chair is what I place
atop these blocks of frozen liquid,
a block positioned beneath each leg,
then slowly walk over to the spot where you stand.
With a wide grin spreading across my face
I draw a gun and place it against your temple
then lead you at gun point across the room,
to a table that sits against the wall.
"REMOVE YOUR PAINTS !" I scream
pressing the gun ever harder into your skull
"Now bend over that table and keep your mouth shut !"
I set the gun down and grab a length of PVC pipe
and with out a word, ram it up your ass
as you scream out in pain,
then grab a length of barbed wire
and feed it up into the pipe, up into you.
This finished I remove the pipe, leaving the wire inside you
the barbs tightly embedded in your innards.
Grabbing the other end of the wire
I again pick up the gun, place it to your head ,
and walk you over to the chair.
"Stand your filthy ass on that chair" I order.
With you standing on the chair,
I take the other end of the wire
and wrap it tightly around the rafter overhead
being sure to leave no slack in it.
"AH, look at you now, not such a big man now are you ?"
Leaving you standing there tears streaming down your face
blood running down your legs,
I walk the wall on the left and grab 4 space heaters.
"What do you need heaters for in July you twisted fuck,
have you completely lost your mind?"
are the words you scream out to me.
"AH, very soon you will see" is my cold response,
as I place one heater facing each block of slowly melting ice,
then turn them all on high.
Ah yes, the heaters will slowly melt the ice
that holds the chair you stand upon,
as this happens the chair will sink lower and lower
thus pulling the wire that is deeply embedded inside you
tighter and tighter ,until it begins to tear out your guts,
piece by piece as you stand screaming in brutal agony.
I stand watching,throwing my head back
I let out a laugh as the smile across my face widens.
Great satisfaction fills my heart
as I watch the last of your life being torn out of your being.
Sweet revenge exacted for the way you tore the innocence away from that poor girl.
Author notes
Rape is a very poor choice , He never should have let me catch him.
In a list
A contest entry
- Give Me The Scoop Of Madness!!!! by lesbian-in-love.
400 points, ended October 3, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well, What would you do ?
Comments
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Wow that was good in a wierd way. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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This was amazing. I am young...but this topic is not new to me. You had so much hatred...You stood up for the assholes who go around doing this to innocent people. Thank you. Very well written.
~W.W~
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very very dark... and it puts images in your mind that are actually quite evil... but nonetheless is very good poem.. keep up the good work.
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UMM WOW me likey, by the end of the poem im sat here like grinning like the Cheshire cat, wanting to jump for joy, really dark writes do this to me, this is an amazing poem it blew me away its also going on my list of favourite poems oh yes, this is just too good to no put on there, such revenge is s sweet and loved, thank you hun this really is amazing, being a victim of so much rape and abuse i can only say thank you, and give you a huge
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from me,
keep penning,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
dark and wicked theme
you slaughtered us boldly with your writing!
Revenge...a dark lovely theme...you did it justice!
We are seeing more of this in real life too...we had
an incident here in Seattle...a mother..of a 7 year old
girl..walked up to a pediaphille's door..asked him to
step outside to talk with him..and she beat him boldly
with a bat..hospitalizing him....of course, they
did arrest for assault and many citizens came forward
and bailed her out.
way to write.........that was piercing and brutal...
and "darkly" rewarding.
ears/Seattle
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Wow.
Wow.
Woah.
Fuck.
Wow.
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thank you... thank you very much hun... Your my angel of darkness. guarding the innocent and broken, though you stand alone.. Thank you for writing this..I have been through that pain, a lot in my life actually.. it seems like it follows me.. But this made me smile.. Thank you, in a why you did this to my ex and to a guy I did not know..thank you..
Angel
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You are most welcome ~Bret~
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Being the victim of a rape 39 years ago this past May 22nd, I can identify with the raw emotion and hate you describe. I hope you purged yourself with this amazing write. Bravo to you for the way you gave comfort to the innocent.
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this is very detailed and exactly what i think every rapist deserves. well stated. thank you for standing up for the innocent.
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ok--now that i am not so emotional over your write, i sincerely thank you for standing up for all victims of this horrid crime of anger, nothing to do with sex, only control and hatred and anger. your voice has truly touched one who has been there as a child and as an adult. i wish there were more like you, unafraid to be a voice in the silence of secrecy.
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I absolutely love this. Having been a rape victim I think this was being nice to this guy. I really enjoyed this, maybe too much. I like the way the story unfolded
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well done
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