weed, pills, and ecstacy thats all we ever use...
As we sit and pass the joint and bottles around the room
We take a hit here and there
Acting like asses pretending to care.
We all use to be above the influence of it all
but here we sit passing around joints and bottles and watching
each other fall.
its weed, pills, and ecstacy that gets us through the day
everyone says we have to get up and find a better way
but it feels so good to sit here bummed out with a "friend" or two
sitting with the bottles and joints with nothing left to do.
Poping the pills, hitting the x, smoking the joint not able to feel
Weed, pills, and ecstacy, how much does it take to make the deal.
All about the weed,pills, and ecstacy its all we ever do
not having anything with us no life no dreams come true
Our lifes have been ruined but we no longer care
Pills and joints fall to the ground as smoke fills the air.
My true love, the one i love with all my heart
walks in on us all, sees us falling apart
but we dont care to blazed we are to see
that as we hit the x,pop the pill, smoke the joint, thats not
what is was suppose to be.
but its all about the drugs to us for thats about all
we dont realize life has ended and we slowly beging to fall
It was the weed, pills, and exstacy that got us through the day
if only we would of listend we could of found a better way.
now we all lie on the floor sheets of white cover our head
and our souls are black and we all see ourself on the ground dead.
it was all about the drugs to us if we would of stayed above the influence
and all
we wouldnt of tooken so many hits that slowly made us fall.
weed, pills and ecstacy still get us through the day
living souls on earth just to find a better way
but we screwed up and had a chance to make it right
but our living souls take others through the dead of night.
Author notes
option2...weed, pills, and x...this is what me and my friends usually did...together or alone...we are just lucky that we are some of the few that made it out alive
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This was okay. It seemed to be like a story done in rhyme... There is one thing you need to majorly work on--- the flow. The lines were way too long to flow well together. It might help if you separated the lines to make them shorter. I also think you could have put more imagery into this. That's some constructive criticism for you. Thank you for entering my contest.
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I do weed and have done e and do drink. but ya, i like this a lot, and no im not a druggie, i dont do shit like that all the time. lol.
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wow this was gd. Just goes to show drugs messes up ur life
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wow this is goood...
and yes its good that you survived.. -
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yeah its very good i did
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I do love this poem, but it does make me worry about you... Please say you don't do this.
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i can proudly say i dont at the moment...but there have been times i have...all i do is smoke a few cigs and then im done..no drugs now
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ahh dude this is awesome
I have been in this place (at times still am)
You captured the life perfectly and I could feel everyword I was reading Great Job
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good...
Wow i like this alot its very well written and worded great. Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck!
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LUCKY!!!!
I missed a lot of you didn't I
, but you know what..I am lucky to know you
...and lucky to see you and your friends could get out of this fantasy world
....Real life might be hard on us sometimes
...but it's also worth living many moments
...as long as you want to see them...and without the drugs we see them clearly....
Lucky me you're back here
XXJeannette
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