So little I have of you anymore,
Tried and pushed too many times over the years.
You've been left raw and frayed,
Ready to lash out without a moments notice.
A contest entry
- PIF - Free Verse Word Prompt by Dalaney.
850 points, ended July 4, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well?
Comments
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this is a solid entry - i like the take you took on the prompt. thank you very much. love, lane
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beautiful poem, darkness mixed in with poetic stucture, excellent piece, best of luck to you in the contest.
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Thanks much, I have been having a real tough time with writing anything lately, I am glad that you liked it ~Bret~
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aww this is really good,
it seemed very personal and its really good,
i love it,
all my love,
kitty xx -
This was a very personal write.. At least to me it seemed.. You did a good job hun, I think that maybe your muse might be moving at least..lol.Best of luck .. *hugs*
Angel
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Nice
Short and brilliant my friend. I have never been good a short poems so I always appreciate reading a good one like this.
Del -
This is a great free verse write. A great job with the prompt. I hope you do well in the contest, good luck.
Kelli
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