Two bodies in contact
Sheets flying
Sweat dripping
Hot room
He enters her
She gasps as he slides
A long part of him
Into her
His mouth finds her sweet breast
As hands rub her thighs
Twisting and turning together
Until a wave of intensity hits
A volcano errupts inside her
And falls to the floor
She rubs his throbbing trojan
Until she calms, they kiss
A contest entry
- Teach Me How To Light A Fire by piccola.
1000 points, ended June 26, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The title of the erotica shows the intensity of the feeling of lust
The language of the poem is simple
Nice hot description
Galaxy2
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some people get really heated over hot, sweaty sex. I just get hot and sweaty lol. I am reminded for some reason of my trip to Italy. My friend wanted me to view some porn which I never had. The cover showed one man and three women. The women wore thongs and spike heels ... It just made me laugh thinkiing of bruised calves and torn sheets. Thank you for entering
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