You are the curvaceous girl
used to getting her own way-
I am the capricious nymph
who had somehow gone astray...
Who cannot forget last night,
dicovering the road back home-
Your skin the finest parchment
map suspended over my body...
each tiny vein another path,
threading familiar territory.
I wandered far down that road
trying to find the light... and you
led me back, tied by those threads
that now hold me contrite,
to that expanse of a heart
pulsing beneath naked skin...
Yes... I remember last night,
urges uncontrollable, imperfect-
My body pushing into you, my ribs
spreading your legs ever further.
Then my tongue back home at last... lodged within pink perfection~
Author notes
Image Prompt/ 10-30 Lines ~ Image Credit: http://flash750.deviantart.com/art/I-and-A-78678591
A contest entry
- A very enticing picture inside for you.......PIF by CinfullyDelicious.
1000 points, ended July 5, 6 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You are deliciously wicked
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This is great--I like how you keep referring to the "road". That seems to intertwine the whole poem together for me, and it drew it to a nice close, touching upon the road idea in the last line. I like it when poets do that with their work, and overall, the imagery was great, as well as the personification and metaphors. Great job!
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oH MY YOU ARE so delightfully nauhty! Blood pressure medication where is it!
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you are a good writer in that your ideas flow nicely and one can follow your thoughts in the poem. I liked the end with the "tongue back home" at the vagina. I suppose, as a man, I would use your imagery and call it "sliding into home?" baseball? you may delete this if you please. Very nice poem and I do like the images and my own reserved thoughts of Eros or two women loving each other, it always seemed so much more pure and clean than a man having sex with a woman with all the competition and sweat. I always consider myself a woman when I touch myself for arousal.
nice poem
thank you
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perfection..this write is perfection..delicious, sensual..and so natural rhyme
Thank you so much and good luck
Cind
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OMG!
This is quite a divergence from your usual erotic verses. The last line was so perfect for this beautiful write! Try and see if you can find another word for "way" in the first stanza The repetition was too much. The rest was great. Nice usage of internal rhyme. Your assonance was great, and your meter, perfect. Best wishes to a dear sister!
Linda
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imahealer
Oh hell... you are so right!!! I edited and think it reads much better now!!! Thank-you! I don't know why I hadn't noticed that? My bad!!!
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Lovely written erotic tale. I love the delicious imagery of this. Nothing wrong with your tongue being lodged within pink perfection. That's hot, thanks for sharing your encounter and good luck in the contest.
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'You are the curvaceous girl'
You're a good judge, honey!
'I am the wayward nymph'
my beloved
'who had somehow lost her way'
Since I have seen you, I've lost my way too
'Now I remember las night
discovering the road back home'
Night is the best time to discover the road back "home"', my love!
'your skin the finest parchment
map hovering over my body'
What beautiful imagery!
I feel like making love to you, cutie, for such fascinating images...
'each tiny way was another path
threading to familiar territory'
There could be nothing more familiar than this
'I had gone too far down that road
trying to find the light'
good for me
'and you
led me back, tied by those threads'
tie me, sweetie, to these threads...permanently
Yes...I remember last night'
How could we forget that, honey!
'urges uncontrollable'
Who wants to control them
'My body pushing into'
skin to skin
'my ribs
spreading your legs over further'
pleasure is mine
'Then my tongue back home at last...
lodged within your pink perfection'
Naughty you!
The night encounter between us has been beautifully described
I relish the sweet associations, love!
Thanks for what you did to me last night...
Kisses all over...for the brilliant erotica, cutie!
Galaxy2
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...a veritable but concise tour de force in a couple of 'nutshells'
The Pink Panther and Peter Sellers would be 'prostrate' and grovelling...That's It...I Got It!!! The Pink Panther: Body Double Entendre and Tender(psychopathia sexualis)in full bloom!
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I see we both took a lighter road (LOL)... although I love this... you really tell a story not just describe an act... It makes this so much richer and - dare I say - satisfying
Wonderful write, full of sensual feelings... Beautifully done...
Ken
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Such a beautiful penning of finally returning sensually home. There is a brass coupling around a golden journey, that has a beginning at the end of being lost. Now reclaimed, the magic of yearning opens new chapters upon once blank pages. The nights cooled kiss steams from heat compiled in heart and soul once nomadic. Like a gypsy who has fallen in love.. a home is built. Beautiful take on the prompt. A most enjoyable read, and best wishes in the comp
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