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Lover of Mine

You give me pain and butterflies
When close, you cannot be
You give me shame and anger
When my mouth runs on without me

You give me new adventures
As it travels through my nose
You give me not the comfort
While I'm in one of my throws

Alas, of all these negatives
Of sickness, doubt, and pride
The love that we are sharing
Shall keep, to forever abide

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Short and sweet. He's such a pain and I'll hold him forever.

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  • Skawe
    June 26, 2008

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    Well, I understood that line, but then again, I know you i have to say that your comment made this poem rather amusing. It's a cute relationship you two have


  • Kelli Marie
    June 25, 2008

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    This is a sweet write, mostly. I really don't understand this part, "You give me new adventures
    As it travels through my nose" Other than that...I like it.
    Kelli