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What is This?

What is this?

that I stop and look
captured by random encounter
and yet...

completely stilled
marveled, mesmerized-
world drowns to faint, as echoes
softly tread their own path of making.
mirroring, but for brief reflection
of something within myself.

knowing the one-way reality
hoping for that raise of head-
slowly,just a peek
so not to frighten...

glimpsed and remembered,
before shoved into the fate stream.
massive consciousness overrides
exquisite moments, where perception
lay stilled, heart swelled
in admiration.



Author notes

poke. prod. Yes, someone has captured my attention span. I'm not saying who...;p
(smiles slowly to self)

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  • toomysterious
    July 2, 2008
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    Lovely write on how these things happen. It is the moments we remember.