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Super Hero


 

I am a super hero

You can tell by the way I dress

My costume shows off my muscles

And it’s made from tight spandex

 

 

I answer the call from near or far

To save a persons life

I’ll remove cats from trees

And squash pesky mice

 

 

For a small fee I’ll fly you round the globe

And to the moon and back

And for a little extra

I put parents in a sack

 

 

 

So next time you need someone

To do your beckoned call

Just scream out Super Hero

He's the one that saves us all

 

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 25, 2008

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    Wonderful! I love the humour in this Love the first bit about showing off muscles with spandex. Reminds me of men who wear Speedos
    Congratulations on your gold trophy
    Gaylene


  • rbruce gold member
    November 24, 2008

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    I love it. Could be interpreted in different ways, but as is its entertaining and a good read. Congrats for winning the gold.


  • catz Moderators member
    November 24, 2008

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    I can't believe I hadn't seen this one yet, Paul... and you even won a Gold with it, how cool
    Your cartoon has glorified a very worthy Mod, you do yourself justice

    Dee


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    November 24, 2008
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    haha
    this was great
    very humorous and light-hearted
    shows off your creativity


  • suseann
    November 24, 2008

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    Love the implication in your cartoon. Twas funny! And the poem was golden too as is evident by it's awarding.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 17, 2008
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    Cute write. Congrats on snagging gold in the contest with this piece. It was well deserved. Nice rhythm and rhyming.

    edit: Looks like it's not the first time I enjoyed this piece. I knew it looked familiar.


    • Cyber Artist Moderators member
      August 17, 2008
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      now that's funny but5 your welcome to visit as often as you like


  • Swan song gold member
    July 27, 2008
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    lol well deserved gold and very very creative


  • liatheddrfreak
    June 26, 2008

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    Bravo!

    This deserves an award of some sort! I now give you the award for... uhhhh... Can I get back to you on that?


  • longlife
    June 26, 2008

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    I like this.i also like the way you ended it.GOOD JOB!!! It sounds like you put a lot of thought into it!


    • Cyber Artist Moderators member
      June 26, 2008
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      oooo wow thanks for the shiny cup I entered cause I like super hero stuff and you had a spot in the contest well done


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Loved the graphic and the story;
    Super Hero just gets his feet back and earth,
    and there is the microphone pointed at him.
    (Great persepective angle, aimed right at him.)
    And the questioner, not concerned about the danger
    from which he escaped, but asking about the cape effect!

    Great!

    Aesthete

  • The Rainbows Mind
    June 26, 2008

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    Hey good write

    It's more concrete as opposed to abstract so I can comment on this one.
    Yeah, it's very good, and in a comedic way pretty much covers the life of a super hero.
    So mr. Super Her I must ask you, are you then jealous of other super heroes that try to steal your shine.
    Think about it, how would spider man react if he went somewhere and saw Super man, would they be the best of friends or worst of enemies.
    Sorry, ui had to. Lame dry humor, I couldn't help it, anyway it conjured thoughts so it accomplished it's purpose.

  • Topnotchsy
    June 25, 2008

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    Cute poem. Good luck in the contest. My only minor issue was that to me the rhythm at times did not flow as well as it might have been able to. Still a enjoyable read.


  • Kitty Cat
    June 25, 2008
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    Wow! That was really good.

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