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Ocean Imagination


                                                                      ll upon the shore.
                                                                    o
Here I sit on the sand as I watch the waves r
The boats g l i d e past me
                                        and I feel a slight relaxation as my toes sink through.
The sun rises and the sky is a painting of patels.
                            I hear your voice.
                                                                        Your lips touch mine for only a second.
You whisper my three favorite words in my ear,
                                                                        I Love You, and my heart jumps off the pier.
As i watch you walk away, the birds chirp softly
                and the beauty of an underwater paradise calls me to take a swim.
                                                       
I get captured by a pirate ship and they force me to walk the plank!
Step, Step, Step and then BANG!

I hit the bottom,

And I'm swept away by the sea into a dreamland of blue.

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  • crazymomma
    June 25

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    This is BEAUTIFUL! You have amazing imagery and metaphores. This was a pleasure to read. I really loved "my heart jumps off the pier"

  • Miss Faith
    June 25

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    "The sun rises and the sky is a painting of patels.
    I hear your voice.
    Your lips touch mine for only a second.
    You whisper my three favorite words in my ear,
    I Love You, and my heart jumps off the pier.
    As i watch you walk away, the birds chirp softly
    and the beauty of an underwater paradise calls me to take a swim. "


    this was lovely. thank you so much for entering. I love it.