Muddled pictures
flicker,
like a thousand fire flies
in an empty field
circling the light
that takes away life
Crashing through the walls
only to be trapped again
a caged beast on display
without an audience
wild thoughts racing
body frozen
a statue, monument,
self pity's crown jewel
Author notes
mcw120588
theme: confusion
A contest entry
- CONTEST FOR BRILLIANT YOUNG MINDS #3 (20 and under only) by islekine.
750 points, ended July 1, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I took your time, now let me have your thoughts....
Comments
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Very well penned...
you missed one small rule....I will delete this once you take care of it....AND add your poem to the finalist list!
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