Mommy
i'm here...its just me
i'm gonna change your life if you let me
i wanna be the one to make you laugh and
just be there to make you smile
Mommy
i want to be there and see you
but i'm too young
we have to be in this together
please don't bail on me
Mommy
don't cry Mommy i don't understand
why you cry, but please don't
Mommy
i love you more than anything in this tiny world i know of
Mommy
don't leave me
A contest entry
- for God sake... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 9, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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Ah..I can see the words moving in the prompt with a feeling of tender cry..I am touched by this piece......thanks for sharing such a heartfelt piece....
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*tears*...like a baby's cry, this is...plaintive and impossible to ignore...Well done.
Peace, Rhonda
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very good job here... i like this we somewhat had the same ideas lol.... great job thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest...!
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