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I'm Here

Mommy
i'm here...its just me
i'm gonna change your life if you let me
i wanna be the one to make you laugh and
just be there to make you smile

Mommy
i want to be there and see you
but i'm too young
we have to be in this together
please don't bail on me

Mommy
don't cry Mommy i don't understand
why you cry, but please don't

Mommy
i love you more than anything in this tiny world i know of

Mommy
don't leave me

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    June 29

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    Ah..I can see the words moving in the prompt with a feeling of tender cry..I am touched by this piece......thanks for sharing such a heartfelt piece....

  • rhondasail
    June 25

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    *tears*...like a baby's cry, this is...plaintive and impossible to ignore...Well done. Peace, Rhonda


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    June 25

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    very good job here... i like this we somewhat had the same ideas lol.... great job thanks for sharing this and good luck in contest...!