I don't know why you don't give a damn
I don't know why you're never there
I don't know why I get my hopes up
Because I know I'm going to get them crushed
You're supposed to be with me
And support me when I'm down
That's your role in my life
But you're a horrible actor
You're only there for the good
Never for the bad
When it's all smiles and laughs
Never tears and sobs
You're an alcoholic, abusive ass
You don't stop for even one second
To realize what you've done to our lives
To realize that it's all over
A contest entry
- give me your pain. by aanika.
525 points, ended July 2, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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i'm extremely sorry about whatever happened to inspire this.
i know it must have been painful to write.
"but your a horrible actor" --> "but you're a horrible actor."
punctuation please?
there is obvious emotion
and for that, i thank you.
good luck. -
great write hun xxx
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