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Alone in my Mind

Missing image
I walk alone
in my mind
lost to myself
longing to be found

Darkness everywhere I turn
clouded skys above
longing to see the beauty
of the stars in the deep blue

Walk for miles
never going anywhere
wanting a hand
to reach out to me

Smile lost
happiness fading
mask covers pain
so no one will see

Depression takes over
when it pleases
been like this for so long
I welcome it with open arms

Comes and goes
like the wind and rain
hopefully in a few days
it will go away

~Tisha~

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Is it depression or is something really missing?
Written January 2nd, 2004

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  • Immortality
    January 2, 2004
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    Tisha~

    Ohhh... This is great. I know how depression is, being a manic and all...It's scary though sometimes with the mood swings. Because you never really know if you're gonna be happy or depressed...Or angry. :S lol, well done.

    [.»W|ck3d J3sT3r«.]
    |||:×:Kati:×:|||


  • Naughtygrlred
    January 2, 2004
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    you know i think oh depression as a friend i knda like being depressed because when your are happy its only for a feww moments then its gone at least with depression u can look forwod to it

  • MollysWall
    January 2, 2004
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    This is so raw. I can feel your pain... you pose a good question is it depression or is something really missing. I wish you lots of luck in finding out. Also I love the title.

    ~M~

  • mina nagi
    January 2, 2004
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    You've explained your intermittent feelings so well... the picture goes well with the subject matter...thanx for sharing..
    mina
    Edited on Jan 02, 4:38 p.m. because ''.