Words: K.Botka
6/25/08
I知 here
My heart is beating in you
I致e a hand & foot print,
though you can稚 see it yet
I知 breathing,
eating what you池e sending me through your placenta
Experiencing everything you are
through my senses
I知 alive, though not expressing fully yet
Give me a chance to be all who I am meant to be
I知 here
Allow me to breathe outside your womb
Don稚 send me to a forbidden tomb
I知 here to live!
Author notes
Abortion is murder!
A contest entry
- for God sake... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A very emotional and sincere write. Lovely message. Well done.
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Ah..a touching scenario you built here with so much tender words..thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece....
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You speak simply, directly, the way a child would...not bloated with an adult frame...well done! best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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great message..... good job here you have penned thank you for sharing this message and write and goood luck in contest...1
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