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Landing

I was jumping,
as high as I could.

Over the clouds
that felt so good.

I did 14 saumersaults
and 9 flips in the air.

I even had time,
to restyle my hair.

But then when I looked down (after messing around)
I found one small problem.  LANDING!





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  • BefuddledPerson
    June 26
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    I love it!So funny!I liked all the rhymes!


  • Sir Squigglim
    June 26

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    oh wow! at first, honestly, i didn't understand why it was so funny, but then the end hit me! that was really good! good luck!