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Her Descent

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She steps off her pedestal of tinsel's facade,

willingly plummeting into the darkness of her abyss,

midnight's chamber where her heart's secrets swim.

 

By day she wears her diadem of smiles,

the sculpted expectations from her princess world,

full of fairy tales, but bereft of passion's light.

 

Dwelling in her suburbia castle

a knight's trophy mannequin,

queen and goddess molded by social clay,

dying on the inside, rotting from love's decay.

 

So she falls from her pristine prison

out of the loneliness that is her bed,

into the blackness of her pillow

to paradises of perfect paramours

where ecstasy sweeps through her soul

in waves of sighs from bitten lips.

 

Night her only writhing game

that she ever plays,

for when one dwells in Camelot

no matter the sadness nor emptiness.

you never run away

being a prisoner to fear

of what others might think

offers no promise of reprieve

unto one's life sentence in a plastic life.

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  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    August 31, 2008
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    Love the words of this poem love it Good Luck and sorry that this contest took so long!!


  • Kage-saumas-girl
    June 28, 2008

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    the vocabulary in this is amazing. ^.^ you sound like a friend of mine when she writes...

    your poem is amazing; really deep.


  • StarEyes
    June 25, 2008
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    WOW!!!! What a read this one is! This is the second one I have read in this contest, with this pic. and it is amazing the different thoughts that it provoked in the two of you. You did a great job on this one my brother!

    Best of luck to you in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta