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Sleepy Blue Ocean

I want to feel like a sleepy blue ocean
knowing the depths underneath
Love driving my emotion
I could never complete

Sweeping me away
never to be washed upon the shore
drifting to another day
not thinking to much anymore

Let my tide never come in
hear the echoes from the distance
Love for you my everything
drowning me in a instance

When the night falls
and the waves crash
do you feel me anymore
Even when I splash

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  • Farewell My Lovely
    July 13, 2008

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    A beautiful poem, sometimes well want to just float away on the waves. The feeling is well realisd here.