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Heartbreaker's Heartbreak

Her looks were as hot as Summer
But her heart was as cold as Winter
And everyone fell for her
Like leaves do in the Fall
But would you ever believe
That Spring never sprung for her

Love, love, love
Just wasn't for the Ice Princess
She was pretty and perfect
But no one was good enough for her

Until he came along
And he broke right through her shell
He set her heart on fire
She melts right in his eyes

He broke the heartbreaker's heart
Without her realizing it


((I can never finish a damn poem in one sitting. Come back laters.))




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  • alesana
    July 5, 2008

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    good

    the poem was ish scary because ive watched a scary music video by cradle of filfth called her ghost in the fog which talks about a queen of snow. watch it if u want. anyways it sounds good but its effect upon me is way different than most people.