My Black Wedding

It's their wedding day
but it feels like a
funeral;
that's what my mother said.

The darkness swept down
the aisle,
it'll curse them
for life;
that's what I heard
my father say.

The guests muttered
about how the music
chilled them and run
shivers down their spine.

I sat there later
and thought about
what they all had said
and came too the conclusion;

sheesh they complain alot!

Author notes

hehehe

needed too have a bit of fun at the end and ... i also got writers block so it was the best I could come up with ^^

Pic credit: Beautiful_Nightmare_by_protogeny

A contest entry

A big big big big big CONTEST..pic inspired...you tell me what type of pic you want!! by MaMa-2-be-Cindy. 1800 points, ended July 7, 2008, 30 entries
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Comments

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MaMa-2-be-Cindy
July 6, 2008

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hehe..maybe not the best best poem..but damn I loved it a lot anyway...loved the funny twist at the end..and you took the blakc wedding themem and ran with it darl

Thanks and good luck

Cind
- Noir mariposa...x
  July 6, 2008
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  Thanks lol Yeah, I got a massive stroke of writers block at the end but anyways
MaMa-2-be-Cindy
June 25, 2008
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http://protogeny.deviantart.com/art/Beautiful-Nightmare-34085114

or

http://enayla.deviantart.com/art/The-melody-of-your-demise-2062198

you can use one or both...just put link in an's or post them up etc

Good Luck
Cind
- Noir mariposa...x
  June 25, 2008
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  Ooo I like them ^^ Dark but pretty
  Thanksies! Shall write in the morning ^^