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Lacerated Dreams

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Within walls of putrid pain,
forceful flames combust.
Liquid fury explodes,
spawning seeds of disgust.

Lacerate skin sheds terror,
failing forces weep.
Split stitches scream,
as unseen tears sleep.

Dreams become infected,
darkness comes your way.
Piercing deaths veil,
enriching with decay.

Laughter is now silent,
blood no longer pure.
Bitter hate bleeds,
for which there is no cure.

Author notes

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Pic credit; Beautiful Decay by =fallnangeltears

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    July 7, 2008

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    speechless darl....friggin wow DARK



    Thank you so much, excellent writing, good luck


    Cind


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Spooky pic!! This write screamed of the dark descending and the torture of the soul.. absolutely brilliant!!!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 26, 2008

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    that is one of the weirdest and coolest pic i have seen and i love the poem you did with it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest