ghostly face, she embodies and her
death-kissed eyes, somehow they
make me feel so alive.
crimson lips, those icy fingertips
and oh her twisted smile,
somehow she makes me want to stay
for a while.
my soul she holds within her mind,
it's troubled and yet how it loves her
even as she loathes me she also..
desires me, me this wicked tarnished fire
every crack, every shard within my
aching heart, she covets me and somehow
i worship her, even in her wretched
exsistance and mine it seems we will be together
till the end of time
A contest entry
- Anything and everything by Fitz1901.
750 points, ended July 22, 2008, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - COME ONE! COME ALL! QUICKY FOR 200 PEOPLE! by Umi Juvariel.
800 points, ended January 21, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the 'I hate you but I love you' feel you have going on here. It was a pleasant change from such serious poetry that screams 'normal' Great job and good luck in my contest!
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I am glad you entered this into a contest very nice write and wish the best of luck
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