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Evicted Victim

Reports fresh from the murder scene
As the news flashes up on the screen
Thoughts are being sorted
As the details are reported
Finally he gets his hands clean
Now interviewing family
And friends
He just can’t see
How they can go on without end
The victim was such a good person
Vehemently its retorted
By his lips as they bend
And his affect worsens
Lamenting sourly
To this life aborted
Justly
If they were
So more holier then thou
Then tell me now
What could have spurred
Such a violent act
From an unusual suspect
Usually peaceful and content
Let’s face the facts
And get it correct
The reality here is very bent
For if we are to explore
And seriously look within
I am neither the evictor
Or the victim

Author notes

Another angle on the run of the mill murder news story. enjoy.

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  • Tattboyspet
    June 26, 2008

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    So more holier then thou - should be than

    another angle??? is this not what the usual story is: plain dude, quiet and never assuming anything turns crazed mental job gone wild lol!
    question is: who am i?


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    June 25, 2008

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    very intreresting reading you have offered today. thank you for sharing this with me and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie