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Her Destiny

 

And the darkness envelopes light,

leaving nothing but broken promises,

and heartfelt lies within the ground,

freezing it to ice shattering realities

and lifting up the once driven moralities,

taking them far from her reach

 

Wishes fall on deaf ears and she

remembers each and every single time

someone had left her to die in the cold,

unaware of the affect it would have

 

And it's no wonder that this rose

can never find enough nourishment;

she's frozen in time on a desert

where there is no water to spare

and no comfort to be found for miles

Life was never a fairytale for her

 

No one's coming to rescue her;

they've all forgotten the location,

or maybe they just don't care enough

to notice that maybe she could use a friend

 

It's all another round about way of saying

that she's undeserving or trust and love

The honesty she put into her entire life,

the loyalty she gives of so freely, denied

No one has the time of day to offer her

that little ounce of reassurance she needs

 

But then, she had always been alone

Ever since she can remember,

everyone had always left her starving

and never bothered to look back

 

She should have never gotten her hopes up

Even on a screen, she is worthless, though

she is unable to be seen by anyone here

She should have known she couldn't escape

from the depths of loneliness devouring her soul

Perhaps this is karma's way of telling her...

 

"You don't deserve to find a home."

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  • This has such depth to it...such emotion puring out from the page...you gave the picture such poetic justice with this write.

    Thank you so much and good luck


    Cind

  • I really hope you don't feel this way, hon'. I know it's a picture inspired poem, but still... you don't need to feel this way! I know that some of us haven't been around as much as we -- or you -- would like, but we're still here for you, no matter what.


    Andandand... yes. A very sad and heartfelt poem, written perfectly by youuuuu. I still envy your ability to write so freakin' much. ._. I feel so.. incompitant compared to you.

    Any way, take care of yourself and all that fun jazz. ^____^

  • This is filled with such pain & sadness. I know that this is about your pain. It shows deep raw emotion. Makes me want to cry. You feel like you are not wanted & loved when that is so untrue. You are needed, & in return you should feel that other's are here for you. But it is so hard for you to see that, because of the pain that you are in. I wish I could set you free from this. But no matter how hard I do try it never works, I think it is because you are stubborn. I really do wish people would see just how much you do care & give you want you want in return, just to know that you are there. In Love & Light... Blessed Be! ♥ ~~Shannon~~

  • UMM WOW im adding this to my fave list of poems because this blew me away the way you took the prompt is just amazing, and the vivid imagery and the pain is almost unbearable, also this write hit home to me so so much because i often feel life this alot, and i mean exactly like this, its amazing how you came up with this,
    all my love,
    kitty xxdx
  • lol I'm guessing this is a reserved spot since its empty? Well I found thsi page by the random button at the bottom of each page... too bad there was nothing here to read lol. Good luck when you do enter.

    Criss
  • http://mentos18.deviantart.com/art/From-the-dark-49524075

    and a second option...

    http://draykonis.deviantart.com/art/Shadowmancer-89519699

    your welcome to use both..or to just use one... post up or place the one/s used in An's etc

    Good luck



    Cind
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