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Haiku - Log Fire

 

Hiss of sizzling log
heaps ashes on flash crackles
beneath smoky fog

 

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pic 1 http://flickr.com/photos/curtisperry/63491928/sizes/m/

pic 2 http://flickr.com/photos/loutravels/309494517/

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  • Lily otv
    September 4

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    Warming ...

    This reminds me that as we had no summer, we must be heading from autumn into winter so it's time to hibernate for a few months in front of a real roaring fire. I have the pleasure of central heating and some imagination

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  • unavailable
    September 3
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    Nice..........


  • sheltered
    June 26

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    Great imagery but I think this is the perfect example of a Haiku-like poem that could have been better if you had not tried to rhyme. "Flash crackle"... love that.

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