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Haiku - The Bird of Time

Winter's distant drums
greet time with fleet beat farewell
as agèd drone hums

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  • beinbienasante silver member
    September 3
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    need I say more?

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  • Galaxy2
    June 27

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    5 + 7 + 5 = 17
    distant drums
    fleet farewell
    winter + drone hums (Nature)
    OK...you followed the traditions

    A wonderful write!

    Galaxy2

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  • sheltered
    June 26
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    nice flow and almost un-noticable rhyme
    well done