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The Lane


Tranquil caramel skies,

and sepia sunsets,

Leafy lanes, so full of colour,

Sage tinted Olive.

Twisting ,taken its path,

Cottage loaf cooking,

Breaded scents filled the air,

Muffins newly baked,

Set to cool or wire racking.

 

Oh those memories.

 

Locked deep in the frame of images,

Eyes reflecting,

On times,

So special,

Of you...

My lover,

My  Best Friend.

 

 

 

 

 


 


 

 


 

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Created artist The_Road_Past_Hell_by_DaCrazyNDN

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Very beautiful take on this prompt...memories held dream are always a wonderful thing...we all need to hold more of them...nicely done...
    thank you for sharing!


  • Swtpoetryman
    June 25, 2008

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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL WOMAN!

    Oh those memories.

    Locked deep in the frame of images,
    Eyes reflecting,
    On times,
    So special,
    Of you...
    My lover,
    My Best Friend.


    A fine piece, indeed! And OH the wonderful, the soulful, the heartfelt, the emotional, and the vivid visual memories - that I could feel, taste, touch, smell, and see - which makes me wish that it was me who was lucky enough to be

    your lover

    and best mate!

    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Zenda-Lokki silver member
    June 25, 2008

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    MMmmmmm

    Wow I could almost smell the fresh loaf baking away. Wonderful poem hun. You are so good at the short prompts.

    Keep penning
    Del


  • Abe 1
    June 25, 2008

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    grt
    u sure show how to paint a picture in wordss
    well done and ope u do ok in de contest
    abe


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    June 25, 2008

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    Stunning writing on the prompt here. Love how you went with this Julie. Just saw the image and thought,yep you got it. Great imagery within your piece here. Well done.

    Darkest
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • maralisa silver member
    June 25, 2008

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    wow julie you have painted some beautiful images and aromas in your poem beautiful there is nothing better than the smell of fresh baked bread and a tranquil walk in the sunshine I loved these words
    Tranquil caramel skies and sepia sunsets,Leafy lanes, so full of colour,Sage tinted Olive.Twisting ,taken its path,Cottage loaf cooking,Breaded scents filled the air,So special,Of you...My lover,My Best Friend.good luck in the contest my freind xmarina


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 25, 2008
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    Very good write here

    Oh you are a master with words and you paint such a vivid piture with them this is a great write


  • daviscth silver member
    June 25, 2008
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    You gave those memories new life in this poem sissy. The imagery is breathtaking.

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