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Soul Longings

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When on the road to "freedom"
I asked what freedom is,
as I found the path rocky
where others before me,
and others beside me
kicked stones along the path,
at times blocking my way.

My soul knew all along
what freedom really is,
as I felt my inner muse
stirring, and I knew then,
as I heeded, it was time
to allow my soul's freedom,
and have faith it could fly.

As my soul was enriched,
my path became smooth, and
the way was clear and focused
as far as my eyes could see.
My soul is now fed for the essential
nourishment of us both, and for

the sustenance of our true destiny.

 

And I learned what it is to really be free...

 

 

Author notes

Contest entry - Bob Dylan Quote Inspiration, by Naridill.

Quote # Two:

“A man is a success if he gets up in the morning
and gets to bed at night, and in between he does
what he wants to do.” ~ Bob Dylan

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  • Sandygram
    June 25, 2008

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    Wonderful Poem

    Hello, You have penned a great take on your quote prompt. Wonderful imagery. A pleasure to read. Best of luck to you in this contest. You take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy

  • carole21
    June 25, 2008

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    nicely written for the prompt . . liked "and others beside me kicked stones from the path" and "As my soul was enriched, my path became smooth" . . good luck in the contest