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End of the Heartache

Her hand seized my heart
As it skipped
Like stones across the water

My knees buckled and gave
While my face flushed
My draining energy
Out of my soul

But I wasn't there
My face blended
And my body bled
Into the racing colors of humanity

In helpless remorse
I suffered through her slow exit
Back out of my life
Devoured by villainous obscurity

In that moment
Of divine opportunity
And stigmatic compunction
I failed to bring an

End to the Heartache

Author notes

the fourth in the 'rose' series. this was written after having seen Rosemary at an amusement park, or rather, somebody who looked exactly like her, i never got to really know but it conjured up this piece.

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  • KayJay
    June 25, 2008

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    Beautiful poignant... great imagery, you old softy, you
    Ken


  • Tattboyspet
    June 25, 2008

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    okay, we've learnt that you must stop going to amusement parks then!!! sheesh!
    you're almost begging with these sessions for Rose!
    your feelings are penned here in fine ink that is written in your blood - stop before you have no more to give!