A better way, there could have been
to find out of birds and bee's.
For a kid at school revealed it all
despite my regretful plea's.
My mother attempted a loving version
but she was a little too late.
For a tarnished view of what adults do
was to become my fate.
I was confused, bedazzled and stunned
I thought it rather absurd,
that human beings would interact
like a bee would with a bird.
A contest entry
- Can you remember when... by Judith Chandler.
700 points, ended June 30, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this a lot. It's very funny and a logical mistake for a kid to make on that confusing subject!
One small mistake. It should be "birds and the bees", not "bird's and the bee's". No apostrophes needed.
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LOL. Yea, it all sounded a bit far fetched to me too!! Good luck in the contest. This was a really good entry.
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Funny!
Funny surprise ending. Lol! Best of luck in the contest. -
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Fantastic
You really made me laugh liked it a lot
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