Religion? Yes I do believe
In, something to relief out
My grieve, my Tears that flows not out
But drips inside, something to sits by my side
To take away the world that I am sucked in,
From Darfur into vampires,
Jezebel, Whose cups fulls of blood,
By her children I am a suck day and night,
I battle but never won the war
I Compete, never won but trailed
From west to east we fights
Everyday and nights,
I hope for a change,
But things stays the same
People wonders, think I am insane
But I am not alone
Others are there like me are torn
But never blaspheme his name
Religion? Yes I do believe in,
Play it well and will win the game
To the next life
Author notes
war in my life, trouble, struggle to survive, since i havent seen my parents in 9 years, living alone, learning through mistake, the bible thought me how to live a good live, i read it day and nights,
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Comments
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It's a good poem, but I can't imagine it as a song really. I can't think of a tune to put with it.
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Great job a nice balance of rhythm and non rhyming lines good luck in the contest you did a good job
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Interesting
Has a nice balance and rhythm of rhyming and non-rhyming lines. Religion is a gift, so use it well!
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