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Dreams Ascend..




When the last trace of pink leaves the sky,
Last petals withering,
            ~ too shy to meet
              The first star shining high,
Dreams ascend..
Decking the crown of the sleeping queen.

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  • Poetryintheblood
    July 6

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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie

  • ShelleyA gold member
    June 26

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    A lovely write. Heartfelt. Whimsical. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Vivid descriptives. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest.