Autumn stays not, long
spring cherishes our genuine desires
winter, wakes up hopes
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purush
A contest entry
- Haiku Contest ---for Visions through Haiku Members only. --- (Those who wish to be a member, apply through the application link inside) by Harrisham Minhas.
475 points, ended July 9, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a positive Haiku.
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Please re-check the syllables.
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Please check it again. It still has 8 syllables.
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Please check "spring cherishes, our desires" . It contains more than 7 syllables.
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