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Acid Dreams

Burning fire,
sunrise gleams,
another day,
of acid dreams.

Glowing color,
saturate tears,
upon your cheeks,
see all fears.

With her beauty,
with her grace,
you attain,
her lovely face.

My misteress,
of this life,
the sweet acid,
for my wife.

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  • Angelflower
    June 25, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job.. I really liked your take on the prompt.. it was sad in a way,but loving as well.. I really enjoyed the ending.. Thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck..


    Angel