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The sweetness in a morning kiss.

Each morning, give me
the gift of your lips
waking me with light
playful kisses

Stimulate my smile
to life with a trail of nibbles,

find that special spot

 on my neck
‘You know the one‘,

 it makes me melt

Cherishing every new day
we rise together
For,

waking to your lips
your kiss,
Is truly the best.

 

 

Author notes

30-60 words --- there's 58 there, just got it under hehehe


Prompt~ Wake me up with your lips

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 5, 2008

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    Simply beautiful and very sweet!
    I love the imagery and emotions
    in this write. Well done and
    congrats on your trophy here!
    Keep up the great work!




    Jeremy0826


  • Blue Spirit
    July 1, 2008
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    nice piece. it's beautiful... and romantic. thanks for sharing


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    you too are so cute together and the poem just shows and symbolises your love for each other. i cant wait to hopefully meet you sis


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    Aww.. this is lovely sis! What a beautiful poem to honour the love you share!


  • sailor ptolema
    June 29, 2008

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    awwwwwwwww
    SOOOOO precious!
    loved this !!!!!!~~~~


    ~s.p.





  • PerfectImperfection
    June 28, 2008

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    Interesting structure there at the end. A light and heart warming piece of love and thought. Nicely done!


  • geron
    June 28, 2008
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    beautiful
    i know that feeling


  • named.disaster--x
    June 27, 2008
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    A lovely poem! I can realte to this one well.wonderfully romantic.

    loves-last-angel

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Awwwww this is just beautiful Congratulations on your well deserved Hm best wishes and much luck always


  • Valley Girl silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    Aww! A lovely poem! I can realte to this one well. I think the best part of the day is getting a good morning kiss from the one you love. Beautiful, thanks for sharing. ♥


  • musik-freek
    June 27, 2008

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    sigh, such romance as from a novel or movie... I love it. wonderful


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    June 27, 2008

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    This is so sensually romantic....That's always a nice morning alarm clock, to be awakened with a kiss...excellent poem...


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 26, 2008
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    wonderfully romantic. Sigh, sigh, sigh.



  • stylization
    June 26, 2008
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    Great write!


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 26, 2008
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    Excellent soft romance here
    I so enjoyed this read.


    Delila


  • Todays Poem Box
    June 26, 2008

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    This is a beautiful piece, softly and wonderfully romantic.


    Congratulations your this poem has been nominated
    for poem of the day in the group Today's Poem.





  • azlyn gold member
    June 26, 2008

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    Kissy Kissy!!!

    How sweet this is my pretty niece!!! Makes me just wanna SMOOCH! Love the soft and romantic background with this Cin...and the pic...just a wonderful write Hun!

    Love you!
    Auntie Az


  • Angelflower
    June 25, 2008

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    awww this is really sweet! and so loving.. You did a wonderful job with those 58 words sis..lol.. I really loved the imagery that was so sweet.. And the emotion in your words are just bursting with love.. beautiful.. Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..


    Angel


  • KayJay
    June 25, 2008

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    Wonderfully sweet and warm... Nice flow and form that evokes a tenderness in the reader... Well done...
    Ken


  • Unsigned gold member
    June 25, 2008
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    Stunning...you and Matt are a great couple...good luck Cinds

    Si


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    June 25, 2008
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    ahh, draw the blinds Cin lol I do like it though. Love Juls


  • Weltt
    June 25, 2008
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    Good luck sis!!

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