It's the voice,
It's back again, that little voice,
In my head, It tells me it's over,
This is where it ends, Time to meet darkness,
Become whole again,
Wait, am I ready?, [Do you know?]
Wait, why is it over?, [Do you really have to go?]
I must,I must leave now, [No, why do you?]
Because this is what you said, [I want your life, this is true]
[It's just Paranoia], No, it's you, They're all talking about me,
You said you knew.....[I do and it's true]
So now, there's really only one thing to do,[Do you want to?]
No, but you told me too, [Yes I did, this is true]
So I take the needle and put it in my vein, [As if you're that game]
Oh My God you're driving me Insane, [It's just Paranoia]
The darkness is coming , I want this to end [Finally you listen to me]
It's nearly over now,[Good], Did I do right to listen to you?,[You did exactly what I wanted you to do]
[I wouldn't have listened to me , Why would you?]
Too late now , it's over... [and now, Are you happy?]
No, I'm not ..[Yes, You're not]
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oooh, wow. i love the paranoia theme, it's very creative and freaky. it's awesome.
kAsSiE
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Wow. This is amazing. I've read many poems on the same topic before, but this is one of the few that grab my attention.
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GORGEOUS! I love your way of a slight dirty/pretty. Though, i've got to say i really enjoy the story line in all of this. It keeps me enticed and happily at that.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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tormented...and tormenting!
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oooooh....what an incredible write. I love the conversation...as already mentioned the power of conversation with ones self is never ending...In a kind of wierd way this did make me smile...I guess because I can totally relate, having similar kinds of conversation with myself on a frequent basis....
Thanks for sharing this, and for taking the time to enter my contest,
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Thats a good poem. It had alot of imagery. It was breath taking. It was powerful as can be and it was just wonderful. Good luck on the contest!!!
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the power of the internal conversation is never ending. when we lose sight of this we often believe that the voice isn't out own.
very powerful stuff keep it up.
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