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the Tide (Haiku)

Missing image
~*~

silver smooth pebbles
appear disappear in sand
as ocean rise, fall...

~*~



June 25' 08

Author notes

Haiku:Syllable count : 5-7-5

Theme: Nature

Photo credit: www.wetcanvas.com

-BhajGovindam (Neha)

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  • anaisnais
    July 6, 2008
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    nicely done, I like this... in line with my own thinking!! lol.


  • ScarletO gold member
    July 5, 2008
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    Nice presentation with the above image.


  • grannyeri gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Lovely picture used for these three lines - very visual poem. So filled with alliteration and images. Wishing you well.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    June 25, 2008

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    Thank you for your Haiku:

    silver smooth pebbles
    appear disappear in sand
    as ocean rise, fall...

    It brings beautiful imagery of wet pebbles at a beach.
    Its pretty.

    Thanks again.

    Harrisham Minhas


  • Venugopal gold member
    June 25, 2008
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    Nice haiku, so true, like life


  • crimsondew
    June 25, 2008

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    Captured the tide really well here..
    all the best in the contest!

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